Free Socialism in Indonesia

Narrowed-down topic :

Socialism → Relationship → Free socialism → Kids and teenagers

Thesis Statement :

Free Socialism among teenagers in Indonesia can cause free sex, drug abuse an crime traits.

Organization (outline) :

Body :

I. Having unhealthy relationship with the opposite sex can cause free sex.

- They think that free sex is evidence of their loving.

- They are curious to free sex because some of their friends have done free sex

- They can not enhance passion because their belief decrease.

- They often change their partner after broke.

II. Having many problems, despair and share with the wrong person can cause drug abuse.

- They usually to go out from home and find something new to try, one of them is drug.

- Some of them think that drug can made them happy.

- They interest to lose their weight or to made them be confident.

III. Having not a lot of money can cause crime traits.

- Social gap among kids and teenagers.

- Their belief decrease.

- There is an opportunity to do that.

Conclusion :

They are many negatives caused from free socialism. So, we must to be careful in socialism, and we must to control and stabilize our self in order to escape from the bad effects of free socialism.